The Carrier. Comments, criticism welcome.

[aebea]

With one look he could see she was no good
Licking lips lusciously suspicious as she stood
With her back arched, she advertised her figure
That’s when he noticed her finger on the trigger
As soon as she dropped the denim, he saw her secret weapon,
She had been concealing, he swears it resembled heaven
And With a swivel in her hips she revealed the whole booty
The treasure she was hiding was a true sight of beauty
His guilty pleasure. Then she surrendered and Let him release the pressure
Sufficiently in multiples just for good measure
But he didn’t wrap his rod with proper protection
A terrible mistake to make with an erection
I guess he was in a hurry to kill his virginity
And now he laid breathlessly in exquisite serenity
The tension that previously existed ceased
What he didn’t know was that she gave him a disease
He should have known because it was all too easy
I guess he didn’t want to judge her just ‘cos she looked sleazy
I guess he just really wished to break down the barrier
And now he’s become another victim of the carrier.

[no homo]

damn that shit sucked, more practice fam

[aebea]

thanks, No Homo. I guess i'll keep practicing.

[ak4d7]

It would be straight if you was in one of those poetry clubs.